Soraya Blake
Well, today I star the paints the flat. I going to start for the living room. I will change the color to white. I decided paints now because I don’t have glass for Studing útil Monday. So, I get my new glasses to continue Studyng English intensively . I make a small change in the apartment. Because really need my glasses for study. I don’t see my book and when written is difficult I know well the words The time is gold. I need to do something to be busy. Thanks for correcting me. 😉
Mar 3, 2021 8:25 AM
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Well, today I started to paint the flat. I am going to start with the living room. I am making a small change in the apartment. I will change the color to white. I decided to paint now because I don’t have my glasses until Monday. I really need to wear my glasses to study. I can't see my book and it's hard to write without the glasses on. So, I am getting my new glasses to continue studying English intensively. As the saying goes "the time is gold". I need to do something to keep myself busy. Thanks for correcting me. 😉
to avoid repetition, you can use other words for CHANGE such as transform, replace, etc. I rearranged your sentence to make it sound more coherent. Happy painting. Hopefully you'll get your glasses very soon. 🤓
March 3, 2021
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Well, today I started the paints of the flat. I will going to start in the living room. I will change the color for white. I decided paints now because I don’t have glass for to study until Monday. So, I will get my new glasses to continue Studyng English intensively . I will make a small change in the apartment. Because I really need my glasses for study. I can’t see my book and when written is difficult to know well the words. The time is gold so I need to do something to be busy. Thanks for correcting me. 😉
March 3, 2021
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Well, today I star the paints the flat. I going to start for the living room. I will change the color to white. I decided paints now because I don’t have glass for Studing útil Monday. So, I get my new glasses to continue Studyng English intensively . I make a small change in the apartment. Because really need my glasses for study. I don’t see my book and when written is difficult I know well the words The time is gold. I need to do something to be busy. Thanks for correcting me. 😉
...today I start to paint my flat. I’m going to start in the living room. ...because I don’t have glasses for studying until Monday Because I really need... I can’t see my book...
March 3, 2021
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