Mannoo Gupta
Today, I am going with my close friends during the evening time. We all have to celebrate one of my friend birthday outside from our hometown. So, Basically I am gonna hangout today in the evening. The place which we all have determined for her birthday is not so far but atleast it will take around 20 minutes to reach that venue. After, celebration of her birthday we might have dinner. It is absolutely not sure due to lack of money. In mine case I am sitting idle due to the pandemic across the world. According to the speculation If rest of my friends will able to manage then, for sure will have the wonderful dinner which inclusively quality time among friendship. Making stunning day each and every needs to be faithful towards their relations whether its about relatives or family circle. We should always remember that one day we all gonna loose everyone one by one. Its true ! only good deeds can be carry forward which relates to their demeanour. Please advise If any corrections required from your side. I would be appreciate your concern towards mandatory changes in the above paragraph. Thanks,
Mar 7, 2021 9:25 AM
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Today, I am going out with my close friends during the evening time. We will celebrate one of my friend's birthdays outside our hometown. Basically I am going to hangout today in the evening. The place where we decided upon for her birthday is not very far away but it will take around 20 minutes to reach venue. After, celebrating her birthday we might have dinner. It is not certain because some of us are short of money.
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March 7, 2021
Today, I am going to hangout with my close friends during the evening. We will all celebrate one of my friend's birthday. The place for her birthday is not too far, but it will take at least 20 minutes to reach from our hometown. Afterwards, we might have dinner. It is not guaranteed due to lack of money. In my case I am unable to work, due to the pandemic across the world. However, if rest of my friends can afford to pay, then for sure we will have a wonderful dinner. Seize the moment! Each and every one of us needs to remain faithful in their relationships, be it friends or family. We should always remember that one day we are all going to lose somebody, each and every one of us. Only good deeds can be carried forward into the next life (?) Please advise me if there are any corrections required. I would be appreciative of any changes you deem mandatory in the above paragraph. Thanks,
Good job. The word order is sometimes incorrrect. This makes it hard to work out what you want to say. Do let me know if my correction was what you meant to say.
March 7, 2021
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