[Urgent] Please help me to proofread this!
If there are better sentences, please let me know.
I studied my course at *** University whilst working full time . It was intense doing both. However, the economics, international history and western cultures courses broadened my horizons. In particular, I was interested in economics subjects, because economics relates to our daily lives.
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I am eager to take this course because I assume this is my last chance (or the last chance I’ll have) to study at school for my career.
I’d probably leave out “at school” as, in the UK at least, it refers to studies up to 16 years of age. Hopefully that helps somehow 🙂