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[Urgent] Please help me to proofread this! If there's better sentences, please let me know. I studied my course at *** University with full-time work. It was intense to study and work both. However, they broaden my horizons with economics, international history and western cultures courses. In particular, I was interested in economics subjects. Because economics relates to our daily lives. . . I am eager to take this course because I assume this is the last chance to study at school for my career.
Mar 8, 2021 10:14 PM
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[Urgent] Please help me to proofread this! If there are better sentences, please let me know. I studied my course at *** University whilst working full time . It was intense doing both. However, the economics, international history and western cultures courses broadened my horizons. In particular, I was interested in economics subjects, because economics relates to our daily lives. . . I am eager to take this course because I assume this is my last chance (or the last chance I’ll have) to study at school for my career. I’d probably leave out “at school” as, in the UK at least, it refers to studies up to 16 years of age. Hopefully that helps somehow 🙂
March 8, 2021
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Overall it's great! Just a few changes for clarification I studied *** at *** University while working full-time. It was intense to study and work at the same time. However, they broadened my horizons with courses in economics, international history and western cultures. In particular, I was interested in subjects related to economics. Because economics relates to our daily lives. . . I am eager to take this course because I assume this is the last chance to study this course at *** University for my career.
March 8, 2021
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