Ana Fernández
Tomy was a child Who always wanted to became an astronaut. His dream became his life objective, and when he had had the minimum age, he presented a solicitude of aplicación to the NASA. Although the first time he was rejected, Tommy Tried to enter the program a second a third, and so on, ending on the tenth and last solicitude. Tommy was disappointed becuse of the time passed while he had been waiting but, when a letter arrived to Storm's House , tommy's House, and he opened the envelope, a healing and confortable hit invades his Chest, the dream will became true.
Oct 6, 2020 12:12 PM
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Tommy was a child who always wanted to became an astronaut. His dream became his life objective, and when he reached the minimum age, he presented a statement of application to NASA. Although the first time he was rejected, Tommy tried to enter the program a second time, then a third, and so on, ending on the tenth and last time. Tommy was disappointed becuse of the long time he had been waiting but, when a letter arrived to Storm's house, Tommy's house, and he opened the envelope, a healing and confortable hit invaded his chest, and he knew his dream would become true.
Not sure quite what you mean by ‘solicitude’ so I have swapped for a noun that makes sense, ‘statement’.
October 6, 2020
Tommy was a child who had always wanted to become an astronaut. His dream became his life objective, and when he was old enough, he applied to NASA. Although the first time he was rejected, Tommy tried to enter the program a second time, a third, and so on, up to a tenth and final application. Tommy was disappointed because of the time that had passed while he had been waiting, but when a letter arrived at Tommy's house and he opened the envelope, a healing and comfortable feeling invaded his chest: the dream would come true. His life objective, or possibly better, his goal in life. Hit? ¿Golpe o chute? 🤔☺️ Up to - hasta. Buen esfuerzo, Ana. No te preocupes por los errores - podemos aprender de ellos. Sigue practicando. Saludos desde Córdoba. Simón.
October 6, 2020
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