My last trip was to Sao Paulo, was to see my Best Friend, we walked on the famous paulista avenue. We took a walk and got to know the replica of Solomon's temple. I really loved, and about my friend e

Nayane Medeiros

My last trip was to Sao Paulo, was to see my Best Friend, we walked on the famous paulista avenue. We took a walk and got to know the replica of Solomon's temple. I really loved, and about my friend e still miss her.

Oct 6, 2020 10:52 PM

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My last trip was to Sao Paulo, I went to see my Best Friend. We walked down the famous paulista avenue and got saw the replica of Solomon's temple. I really loved it, and I already miss my friend.

Good job, Nayane! I’ve never been to São Paulo, but I’m sure it’s lovely :)

October 7, 2020

These are very small corrections. Very nice job, and I would love to see King Solomon's Temple it has to be quite something to see.

October 7, 2020

My last trip was to São Paulo. It was to see my best friend. We walked on the famous Paulista Avenue. We took a walk and got to know the replica of King Solomon's temple. I really loved it, and about my friend, I still miss her.

October 7, 2020

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