Could someone help me with correcting this paragraph, please?
In my country, parliamentary elections are close. Many cities are divided based on clans. People might not have much choice for whom they could vote if one of their clan is running for office. Youth refuse to participate in those kind of practices and
say it violates democratic principles. People here, especially who are old, might get mad at you if you do not agree with them. Youth want to change
the whole system, but it takes time for people to separate themselves from their clan's traditions and convince them this is better.