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A hole is knocked into a crypt and a rope thrown down. It is Romania 1881. A tomb raider descends toward the crypt by climbing down a rope and then another. Once they hit solid ground, they see that the body on the coffin has fangs and is withered beyond recognition, so they investigate the sides of the coffin before breaking into the contraption’s second level, where they find gold and another body. What one of them doesn’t realize is that they’re not really there to find treasure. While he celebrates their newfound fortunes, the other, who doesn’t show his face, stabs his partner in the stomach, slit his throat and lets the blood pour down onto the mouth of the first body and enough makes it to the second body to reanimate. The second shriveled corpse begins to stir to life until fully resurrected. Dracula lives!
Oct 10, 2020 4:28 PM
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A hole is knocked into a crypt and a rope thrown down. It is Romania 1881. A tomb raider descends toward the crypt by climbing down one rope and then another. Once they hit solid ground, they see that the body in the coffin has fangs and is withered beyond recognition, so they investigate the sides of the coffin before breaking into the contraption’s second level, where they find gold and another body. What one of them doesn’t realize is that they’re not really there to find treasure. While he celebrates their newfound fortunes, the other, who doesn’t show his face, stabs his partner in the stomach, slits his throat and lets the blood pour down into the mouth of the first body and enough makes it to the second body to reanimate it. The second shriveled corpse begins to stir to life until fully resurrected. Dracula lives!
This is really good, I could only find a few minor grammar issues. One other thing - I'm not quite sure why you use "contraption" to refer to the crypt. Usually a contraption is a mechanical thing...
October 10, 2020
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