Nicole
Could you correct it for me The internet is a tool in the modern life, but in the developing time, it's could bring some bad things in now. Firstly, all the website need our information to applied, and some website couldn't to guide these, more and more information were be carried in the criminals. They use this information in illegal. Secondly,the over dependence on the internet information has caused the human couldn't independent thinking. It's an upset thing, which is meant the human are lost the creative's skill. Last but not least is that human can't put down their smart phone or computer and had effected their learning and living.
Oct 12, 2020 10:30 AM
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Could you correct it for me The internet is a tool in the modern life, but in the developing time, it could bring some bad things in now. Firstly, all websites need our information to apply, and some websites cannot guide on these. More and more information are carried by the criminals. They use this information illegally. Secondly, the over dependence on the internet information has deterred the human from independent thinking. It's an upsetting thing, which means the human are losing the creative skills. Last but not least is that humans can't put down their smart phone or computer and it affects their learning and living.
October 12, 2020
Could you correct it for me The internet is a tool used in modern life. But, in developing times it could possibly bring about some bad things. Firstly, all the websites need our information to be applied, and some website couldn't guide these, more and more information has been carried in by criminals. They use this information for illegal acts. Secondly,the over dependence on the internets information has caused people to lack independent thinking. It's an upsetting thing, it means people have lost their creativity skills. Last but not least is that people can't put down their smart phone or computer and it has effected their ability to learn and live.
October 12, 2020
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Nicole
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), English, Japanese
Learning Language
English, Japanese