Could someone check this email and make it sound more natural?. Please feel free to edit or make any changes you deem necessary Hello, A few days agos, My co-worker Enrich placed an order for two

Jose P

Could someone check this email and make it sound more natural?. Please feel free to edit or make any changes you deem necessary Hello, A few days agos, My co-worker Enrich placed an order for two pieces on this purchase order number 96HJ6321. We have committed to our client that they are installed by December.The last time we ordered the same pieces.They took around 4 weeks to be delivered to you. Could you get in touch with the supplier and find out when they will be able to deliver to you? I would like to inform our client that we will able to meet the established deadline. I’m eager to receive your feedback

Oct 19, 2020 6:30 AM

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Could someone check this email and make it sound more natural?. Please feel free to edit or make any changes you deem necessary Hello, A few days agos, My co-worker Enrich placed an order for two pieces with this purchase order number: 96HJ6321. We have told our client that they will be installed by December. The last time we ordered the same pieces they took around 4 weeks to be delivered to you. Could you get in touch with the supplier and find out when they will be able to deliver to you? I would like to inform our client whether we will able to meet the established deadline. I’m eager to hear back from you.

Very good. If you wanted to make the email more polite you could add at the end “Thank you in advance” :)

October 19, 2020

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