The Tim じぁん!!!
It’s sunny and cloudless today. After school, on my mom’s way to pick me up, my mom’s car has broken down. There’s no surprise because it’s an old, blue beetle, even way older than me. People have feeling for old things, especially cars. Our beetle has been taking me from here to there, since I was a itty-bitty thing. I love it and I hope it can be fixed soon. Today’s word is “beetle”. I can’t stand creepy-crawlies, but beetles are exceptions
Sep 30, 2021 8:01 AM
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It’s sunny and cloudless today. After school, on my mom’s way to pick me up, my mom’s car has broken down. It's unsurprising because it’s an old, blue beetle, even way older than me. People are sentimental about old things, especially cars. Our beetle has been taking me from here to there, since I was an itty-bitty thing. I love it and I hope it can be fixed soon. Today’s word is “beetle”. I can’t stand creepy-crawlies, but make an exception for beetles.
I think your informal writing style is great, so it's not appropriate for me to nit-pick corrections :)
Sep 30, 2021 8:13 AM
Hi Tim. Correction: It’s sunny and cloudless today. My mom's car broke down on the way when she came to collect me/pick me. I wasn't surprised because it's an old beetle; it's even older than me! Many people love old things, especially cars. Our beetle has been taking me to many places since I was an itty-bitty thing. I love it and I hope it can be fixed soon. Today’s word is “beetle”. I can’t stand creepy-crawlies, but beetles are exceptions.
Sep 30, 2021 8:32 AM
It’s sunny and cloudless today. After school, on my mom’s way to pick me up, my mom’s car has broken down. There’s no surprise because it’s an old, blue beetle, even way older than me. People have feeling for old things, especially cars. Our beetle has been taking me from here to there, since I was a itty-bitty thing. I love it and I hope it can be fixed soon. Today’s word is “beetle”. I can’t stand creepy-crawlies, but beetles are exceptions
It's sunny and the sky is clear. When my mom was on her way to pick me up from school, her car broke down. We'll I am not surprised because it's and old blue beetle car (way older than me). Some people do value old things, especially cars. Our beetle car has always been taking me from here to there back in my childhood days until now. I love it and I hope that it will be fixed soon.
Sep 30, 2021 3:15 PM
It’s sunny and cloudless today. After school, on my mom’s way to pick me up, my mom’s car has broken down. There’s no surprise because it’s an old, blue beetle, even way older than me. People have feeling for old things, especially cars. Our beetle has been taking me from here to there, since I was a itty-bitty thing. I love it and I hope it can be fixed soon. Today’s word is “beetle”. I can’t stand creepy-crawlies, but beetles are exceptions
It’s sunny and cloudless today. After school, on my mom’s manner to select out me up, my mom’s vehicle has damaged down. There’s no wonder due to the fact it’s an antique, blue beetle, even manner older than me. People have feeling for antique things, in particular cars. Our beetle has been taking me from right here to there, considering the fact that I became a itty-bitty thing. I adore it and I desire it could be constant soon. Today’s phrase is “beetle”. I can’t stand creepy-crawlies, however beetles are exceptions
Sep 30, 2021 9:22 AM
It’s sunny and cloudless today. After school, on my mom’s way to pick me up, her car broke down. It was no surprise because it’s an old, blue Beetle, even older than me. People have feelings for old things, especially cars. Our Beetle has been taking me from here to there, since I was an itty-bitty thing. I love it and I hope it can be fixed soon. Today’s word is “beetle”. I can’t stand creepy-crawlies, but beetles are the exception.
I hope the Beetle survives. Beetle here is the name of the car so needs a B.
Sep 30, 2021 9:11 AM
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The Tim じぁん!!!
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), English, Japanese
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English