Maria
Day 302/365 Hi there! A few years ago my hometown had some big reconstruction. The government decided to improve and made bigger our center part. During one year a lot of people was working there. That place have a huge space. This landscape is quite difficult because this place is in the forest and in the mountain. After architectures decided made our old park bigger, the builders had to cut a lot of old threes. Certainly, it's not so good for nature, but it's very good for developing our city. This is a tourist city, but unfortunately we don't have a lot of places for walking. ( I'm not saying about the forest and mountain, these are really enough in our city). It always was a very popular place in our city, but now it became more! They added some modern things and now we can spent our time with more comfortable.
Oct 7, 2021 3:00 PM
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Day 302/365 Hi there! A few years ago my hometown had some big reconstruction work done. The government decided to improve and enlarge our town center. A lot of people worked on it over the year. That place has a lot of space. The terrain is quite difficult because this place is in the forest and the mountains. After architects decided to make our old park bigger, the builders had to cut down a lot of old trees. It's certainly not good for nature, but it's very good for developing our city. This is a tourist city, but unfortunately we don't have a lot of places for walking. ( I'm not talking about the forest and mountain, there really are enough in our city). It always was a very popular place in our city, but now it has become more so! They added some modern things and now we can spend our time there in greater comfort.
October 7, 2021
Hi there! A few years ago my hometown had some big reconstruction. The government decided to improve and made bigger our center part. During one year a lot of people was working there. That place have a huge space. This landscape is quite difficult because this place is in the forest and in the mountain. After architectures decided made our old park bigger, the builders had to cut a lot of old threes. Certainly, it's not so good for nature, but it's very good for developing our city. This is a tourist city, but unfortunately we don't have a lot of places for walking. ( I'm not saying about the forest and mountain, these are really enough in our city). It always was a very popular place in our city, but now it became more! They added some modern things and now we can spent our time with more comfortable.
Hello, I think you might say : " during one year a lot of people WHERE working there ( because is plural). You maybe would like to say that " this landscape is quite difficult TO REACH because..."and also " After architectures decided TO MAKE our old park bigger than before. This is a tourist town, but unfortunately we don't have a lot of places TO TAKE A WALK.( I'm not TALKING about the forest and mountainS. After you can write " they added some modern things and now we can SPEND our time more CONFORTABLY".I hope I explained wht I mean using Capital Letters for those things I think you might need to correct.
October 7, 2021
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