Olga Sapozhnikova
Would you correct this text for me, please? 365 days of writing prompts February 26 Happily ever after. 'And they lived happily ever after'. Think about this line for a few minutes. Are you living happily ever after? If not, what will it take for you to get there? I don't consider happiness like a list of items. I feel happiness like liveliness. When I feel that the air is tasty and the world is bright like after the rain, I can say I feel happy. This condition isn't very often guest in my house. Sometimes I feel happy when finishing a big hard job or a project. It would be easier if it was a list of items like in a computer game. When you achieve a goal, you'll have scores and get some happiness. #365daysofwriting #365daysofwritingprompts
Feb 26, 2021 4:17 PM
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Would you correct this text for me, please? 365 days of writing prompts February 26 Happily ever after. 'And they lived happily ever after'. Think about this line for a few minutes. Are you living happily ever after? If not, what will it take for you to get there? I don't consider happiness like a list of items. I feel happiness like liveliness. When I feel that the air is tasty and the world is bright like after rain, I can say I feel happy. This condition isn't very frequent guest in my house. Sometimes I feel happy when finishing a big hard job or a project. It would be easier if it was a list of items like in a computer game. When you achieve a goal, you'll have scores and get some happiness. #365daysofwriting #365daysofwritingprompts
February 26, 2021
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