to begin with, I didn't take this photo, I find it on Google I choose an image of an animal from South America, called Capybara. It is a giant rodent that can be found in Brazil. I live in Brazil, an

Carol

to begin with, I didn't take this photo, I find it on Google I choose an image of an animal from South America, called Capybara. It is a giant rodent that can be found in Brazil. I live in Brazil, and in my whole life, unfortunattely I never get a chance to see this curious animal in real life. I heard that they are friendly animals, but it not means that them can't be a little dangerous, cause they have sharp teeth. Last week I was watching the news, and was reportedly that a man was attacked by one while he was swaming in a lake. Despite that bad news, I still think they are super cute, and I believe that they just attacked people when they are feeling threatened, that is what all the animals do when they are feeling fear, they attack who is threatening them in some way.

Mar 2, 2021 1:25 AM

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To begin, I didn't take this photo. I found it on Google. I chose an image of an animal from South America called a Capybara. It is a giant rodent that can be found in Brazil. I live in Brazil. Unfortunately, I never have had a chance to ever see this curious animal in real life. I heard that they are friendly animals, but it doesn't mean that they can't be a little dangerous because they have sharp teeth. Last week, I was watching the news, and it was reported that a man was attacked by one while he was swimming in a lake. Despite that bad news, I still think they are super cute. I believe that they just attack people when they are feeling threatened. This is what all the animals do when they are afraid. They attack whomever is threatening them in some way.

Great job! You did a wonderful job communicating your thoughts. Be careful of verb tenses especially past perfect and past continuous tense. Past continuous tense: "He was swamming", swam would be past tense, but in past continuous you would change it to swimming= "He was swimming". There were a few awkward sentences, but the meaning and intention was still very clear!

March 2, 2021

to begin with, I didn't take this photo, I found it on Google I choose an image of an animal from South America, called Capybara. It is a giant rodent that can be found in Brazil. I live in Brazil, and my whole life, I have never had a chance to see this curious animal in real life. I heard that they are friendly animals, but it doesn't mean that they can't be a little dangerous, because they have sharp teeth. Last week I was watching the news, and it was reported that a man was attacked by one while he was swimming in a lake. Despite that bad news, I still think they are super cute, and I believe that they just attack people when they are feeling threatened, that is what all the animals do when they are feeling fear, they attack who is threatening them in some way.

I agree - very cute!! :)

March 2, 2021

to begin with, I didn't take this photo, I found it on Google I chose the image of an animal from South America, called Capybara. It is a giant rodent that can be found in Brazil. I live in Brazil, and in my whole life, I never had the chance to see this curious animal in real life. I've heard that they are friendly animals, but it does not mean they can't be a little dangerous, 'cause they have sharp teeth. Last week I was watching the news, and it was reported that a man was attacked by a Capybara while he was swimming in a lake. Despite that bad news, I still think they are super cute, and I believe they just attack people when they are feeling threatened, that is what all the animals do when they are afraid, they attack who is threatening them in some way.

Good job!

March 2, 2021

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