Wendy
My favorite cartoon my favorite cartoon is Peppa pig. There are four main characters in the cartoon: daddy pig, mommy pig, Peppa and her little brother George. They are a happy and lovely family who lives in a big cozy house. Daddy pig is kind and humorous. He likes to read his newspaper in the sitting room. Mommy pig is amazing. She is good at everything in life. As for Peppa and George, their favorite game is jumping in the muddy puddles. Whenever it rains, they put on their raincoats and boots and cheerfully run out to the puddles. I’ve almost watched all the episodes of this cartoon, as well as a lot of story books about it. The reason why I like it so much is that it always reminds me of my own family. There are also four members in my family: daddy, mommy, my little sister and I. We always play, read and laugh together. And most important, we love each other very much, just like Peppa and her family. Hello. My 6-year-old niece is preparing for her school English speech. Can anyone help us revise this article? Thanks a lot!!!!
Mar 2, 2021 1:52 AM
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My favorite cartoon my favorite cartoon series is Peppa Pig. There are four main characters in the cartoon: daddy pig, mommy pig, Peppa and her little brother George. They are a happy and lovely family who live in a big cozy house. Daddy pig is kind and humorous. He likes to read his newspaper in the living room. Mommy pig is amazing. She is good at everything in life. As for Peppa and George, their favorite game is jumping in muddy puddles. Whenever it rains, they put on their raincoats and boots and cheerfully run out to the puddles. I’ve watched almost all the episodes of this cartoon, as well as read a lot of story books about it. (better: a lot of Peppa Pig story books) The reason I like it so much is that it always reminds me of my own family. There are also four members in my family: daddy, mommy, my little sister and I. We always play, read and laugh together. And most important, we love each other very much, just like Peppa and her family. Hello. My 6-year-old niece is preparing for her school English speech. Can anyone help us revise this article? Thanks a lot!!!!
EXCELLENT JOB!!!
March 2, 2021
My favorite cartoon My favorite cartoon is Peppa pig. There are four main characters in the cartoon: Daddy Pig, Mommy Pig, Peppa and her little brother George. They are a happy and lovely family who live in a big cozy house. Daddy Pig is kind and humorous. He likes to read his newspaper in the sitting room. Mommy Pig is amazing. She is good at everything in life. As for Peppa and George, their favorite game is jumping in mud puddles. Whenever it rains, they put on their raincoats and boots and cheerfully run out to the puddles. I’ve watched almost all the episodes of this cartoon, as well as read a lot of books about it. The reason why I like it so much is that it always reminds me of my own family. There are also four members in my family: Daddy, Mommy, my little sister and I. We always play, read and laugh together. And most importantly, we love each other very much, just like Peppa and her family. (Great job!) Hello. My 6-year-old niece is preparing for her school English speech. Can anyone help us revise this article? Thanks a lot!!!!
March 2, 2021
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