Lucy is a lady very extroverted she likes go to parties, bars and concerts. She has brown eyes, brown hair, she is skinny and pale. Today she will go to a concert and she is not prepared to go. She th

Cecilia

Lucy is a lady very extroverted she likes go to parties, bars and concerts. She has brown eyes, brown hair, she is skinny and pale. Today she will go to a concert and she is not prepared to go. She thought “ if I would have bought that dress, I will be ready, so suddenly come up her friends, and they ask her, why you are so sad? She explained that, she doesn’t have a great dress. Ok her friends replied, we have a great idea wait a minute. They brought the dress and lucy stare them, what?lucy was excited and happy, she could not believe that her friends did that for her. And is not just that, her friends got a tickets for the first row. This was amazing, to do something for others always is good.

May 25, 2021 6:16 PM

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Lucy is a very extroverted lady (1) : she likes going to parties, bars and concerts. She has brown eyes, brown hair, she is skinny and pale. Today she will go to a concert but she is not ready. She is thinking “If I had bought that dress, I would have been ready.” Suddenly her friends come up and they ask her “Why are you so sad?” She explains that she doesn’t have a great dress. “Ok,” her friends reply, “we have a great idea, wait a minute.” They go and buy the dress, and Lucy stares at them. “What???” Lucy is excited and happy, she cannot believe that her friends did that for her. And it is not just that, her friends also got tickets for the first row. It’s amazing. To do something for others is always good.

(1) Or “Lucy is an extrovert”. You can either use the past tense to tell the story or the present tense. I think you had a bit of a mix, so I’ve opted for present as I think it works better here. 🙂. Nice little story!

May 25, 2021

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