Kanae
Could someone correct my English and tell me a more natural way to write that following sentences? I went to my sister's house and took care of my nephews today. Even if children have such a small body, How can they have so much stamina? I had a good time but I'm exhausted.lol By the way, I like watching SpongeBob with them. My best favorite character is Patrick Star, he is too funny.😂 Japanese 今日は姉の家に行って甥っ子たちの面倒を見てました。子供ってこんな小さな身体なのに、どうしてこんなに体力があるんだろう?楽しかったけど、すごく疲れました。笑 ちなみに、甥っ子たちとスポンジボブを見るのが好きです。1番お気に入りのキャラはパトリックです。彼は面白すぎる!
Oct 18, 2020 11:58 AM
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I had a good time but I'm exhausted.(I was exhausted, but I was really happy.) My favorite character is Patrick Star(一番好きなキャラクター、でしょ?best とは、最高と言われる。favorite とは、一番好きなものですね。でも、二つの言葉一緒に使ってことはダメです。)he’s the same as me.
October 19, 2020
Could someone correct my English and tell me a more natural way to write that following sentences? I went to my sister's house and took care of my nephews today. Even if children have such a small body, How can they have so much stamina? I had a good time but I'm exhausted.lol By the way, I like watching SpongeBob with them. My best favorite character is Patrick Star, he is too funny.😂 Japanese 今日は姉の家に行って甥っ子たちの面倒を見てました。子供ってこんな小さな身体なのに、どうしてこんなに体力があるんだろう?楽しかったけど、すごく疲れました。笑 ちなみに、甥っ子たちとスポンジボブを見るのが好きです。1番お気に入りのキャラはパトリックです。彼は面白すぎる!
I completely agree, how do kids have such never ending energy?! I think they are always so excited about life that the adrenaline keeps them going...or maybe it’s because they focus more on what is happening in that moment? (Instead of dwelling on the past or future) As adults our minds are occupied with other things all the time, maybe that’s where all our energy goes?! If you find out the answer let me know haha!
October 18, 2020
Could someone correct my English and tell me a more natural way to write that following sentences? I went to my sister's house and took care of my nephews today. Even if children have such a small body, How can they have so much stamina? I had a good time but I'm exhausted.lol By the way, I like watching SpongeBob with them. My best favorite character is Patrick Star, he is too funny.😂 Japanese 今日は姉の家に行って甥っ子たちの面倒を見てました。子供ってこんな小さな身体なのに、どうしてこんなに体力があるんだろう?楽しかったけど、すごく疲れました。笑 ちなみに、甥っ子たちとスポンジボブを見るのが好きです。1番お気に入りのキャラはパトリックです。彼は面白すぎる!
Patrick is so funny 😂👍
October 18, 2020
Could someone correct my English and tell me a more natural way to write that following sentences? I went to my sister's house and took care of my nephews today. Even if children have such a small body, How can they have so much stamina? I had a good time but I'm exhausted.lol By the way, I like watching SpongeBob with them. My best favorite character is Patrick Star, he is too funny.😂 Japanese 今日は姉の家に行って甥っ子たちの面倒を見てました。子供ってこんな小さな身体なのに、どうしてこんなに体力があるんだろう?楽しかったけど、すごく疲れました。笑 ちなみに、甥っ子たちとスポンジボブを見るのが好きです。1番お気に入りのキャラはパトリックです。彼は面白すぎる!
“I went to my sister’s house and took care of my nephews”✅ “Even though children have such small bodies, how can they have so much energy?” “I had a good time but I’m exhausted lol. By the way, I like watching SpongeBob with them” ✅ “My favorite character is Patrick Star, he is too funny. 😂”
October 18, 2020
Could someone correct my English and tell me a more natural way to write that following sentences? I went to my sister's house and took care of my nephews today. I find it hard to understand how children can have so much stamina when their bodies are so small. I had a good time, but I'm exhausted.lol I like watching Sponge Bob Square Pants eith them. My favourite character is Patrick, he is so funny.😂 Japanese 今日は姉の家に行って甥っ子たちの面倒を見てました。子供ってこんな小さな身体なのに、どうしてこんなに体力があるんだろう?楽しかったけど、すごく疲れました。笑 ちなみに、甥っ子たちとスポンジボブを見るのが好きです。1番お気に入りのキャラはパトリックです。彼は面白すぎる!
October 18, 2020
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Kanae
Language Skills
English, Japanese
Learning Language
English