Abdullah
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THANK YOU IN ADVANCE FOR THE CORRECTIONS 🙂 PART 1 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? “Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today’s world.” Use reasons and details to support your opinion. I agree that internet usage have positive and enormous effect on life in today’s world.In my opinion,access to internet enables to learn a subject ,ordering food and it helps to waste less time while making all of them. To begin with,many people use the internet to access to the social media platforms,learn the subjects that they need and discover new things.We can reach the best course materials easily.The advantages of online courses are flexibility ,documentation ,reduced costs and being not tied down to a fixed schedule.Internet gives the students the opportunity of pausing the lessons. Thus,students can keep watching them whenever they’re available.They can obtain the information fast and apply on their tasks.The lessons start to become more affordable and students do not pay so much money to take courses and find lots of subjects on internet.They can decide to take the lessons which suits for them.Employers can carry out the meeting, interviews and some employees work remotely thanks to internet access. Use of internet provide people to communicate with each no matter where they’re as long as they can access to internet.Documents storage needs wide places but now they can be stored on cloud applications.
Oct 19, 2020 11:26 AM
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THANK YOU IN ADVANCE FOR THE CORRECTIONS 🙂 PART 1 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? “Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today’s world.” Use reasons and details to support your opinion. I agree that internet usage has an enormously positive (or: positive and widespread) effect on life in today’s world. In my opinion, access to the internet enables online studying, ordering (takeout) food, and it helps to waste less time while doing all of them (better: all while saving time we would otherwise waste doing these tasks). To begin with,many people use the internet to access social media platforms,learn the subjects that they need and discover new things.We can reach (better: we have access to) the best course materials easily.The advantages of online courses are flexibility ,documentation ,reduced costs and being not tied down to a fixed schedule (better: a flexible schedule). the Internet gives students the opportunity to pause lessons. Thus,students can keep watching them whenever they’re available (better: students can watch at a pace that suits them, because the lessons are always available).They can obtain the information fast and apply it to their tasks.The lessons start to become more affordable and students do not pay as much money to take courses because they find lots of subjects on the internet.They can decide to take the lessons which suit them. Employers can carry out meetings and interviews, and some employees work remotely thanks to internet access. Use of internet provides people with the means to communicate with each no matter where they are (no abbreviations at the end of a phrase) as long as they have access to the internet.Documents storage needs wide places (better: filing physical documents takes up a lot of space) but now they can be stored on cloud applications.
October 19, 2020
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Abdullah
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