Mari Kim
I was not the one who is care about environment. Before the government started enforcing the laws about plastic bags, I would use plastic bags easily. Since I had to pay for plastic bags, I usually bring my own bag with me because I think it's a waste of money. But now I try to be more eco-friendly by cut down on the use of electricity and water. Could you please make my writing sound more natural? Thank you so much.
Nov 15, 2021 10:19 AM
Answers · 4
I'll try to make it sound more natural for you. I was not one to care much about the environment. Before the government started enforcing laws regarding plastic bags, I would regularly use plastic bags when I go shopping. Since I had to pay for plastic bags I would usually bring my own because I think it would be a waste of money to buy them. But now I try to be more eco-friendly by cutting down my electricity and water usage. I tried not to change the message of the writing too much and rather focused on making it flow better. Hope this helps and if you are interested feel free to book a lesson with me if you want to work on your English more. But over all your writing wasn't bad. Just needed that touch of refinement that comes with practice speaking the language.
November 15, 2021
Hey you are a native korean speaker so can u tell how to pronounce ㄹ?
November 15, 2021
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