Kate
Hi everyone! Could someone please check my short introduction for an application I'm working on? I would really appreciate it and always happy to help you out with Russian. Thanks! I have a Master's degree in Applied Mathematics and almost thirteen years of experience specializing in Business Analytics and Customer Experience Management for the biggest financial and telecommunication companies in Russia. After my family moved to the USA, I began learning English and decided to try myself as a Math Teacher. While enjoying teaching kids math, I realize how much driving the process of problem-solving is for me. I miss the challenges, high-speed dynamic, and teamwork insights I used to have at my work before. Learning new things is an incredibly joyful experience, and I'd like to use my full potential to discover The Data Science field and step on a new stage of my career.
Nov 22, 2021 2:56 PM
Answers · 4
You can say "try being a Math teacher" and "the data science/Data Science field" instead. Great job and all the best in your new career stage! :)
November 23, 2021
Привет. Меня зовут Джей. Я из Лондона. Я был учителем английского языка 10 лет и я могу тебе помочь с английским. я давно учу русский и хочу свободно говорить на русском. Мы можем общаться 15 минут на английском а потом 15 минут на русском
December 11, 2021
The writing is excellent, but I would change a few things that sound a little strange. Написание отличное, но я бы изменил несколько вещей, которые звучат немного странно. "try myself as a Math Teacher" = This is ok, but maybe it can be rephrased to sound more natural. While enjoying teaching kids math = While I enjoy teaching kids math (a little more common) how much driving = this sounds strange, perhaps "how captivating" or "how much I am driven by the process of problem-solving" high-speed dynamic = Perhaps "high-speed environment" would be better. step on a new stage = maybe "move into a new stage" Ваш текст отличный и полностью понятный. Мои предложения только для добавления «плавности». Удачи!
November 22, 2021
Hi, of course you need to start your paragraph with self introduction first Now for your paragraph: I have a Master's degree in Applied Mathematics and an estimate of thirteen years of experience specializing in Business Analytics and Customer Experience Management for some of the biggest financial and telecommunication companies in Russia. After my family had moved to the USA, I began learning English and decided to expand my experties as Math Teacher. While enjoying teaching maths tokids, I realized how much driving the process of problem-solving is for me. I miss the challenges, high-speed dynamic, and teamwork insights I used to have at my work before. Learning new things is an incredibly joyful experience, and I'd like to use my full potential to discover The Data Science field and take the next step towards a new stage of my career. Ok now your paragraph is grammatically flawless and i changed few details to what i think sounds better, good luck!
November 22, 2021
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