Linda
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This is my father. He is kind of humorous and gentle.today we went to the orchard to picked up cherries. However,when we arrived there,there were two bags of cherries. All of this are my father picked up. He climbed the high use a ladder. I don’t know how to express my father’s love. But through these cherries, I want to say my father is the man who loves me best.
Jun 11, 2021 5:57 AM
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This is my father. He is kind of humorous and gentle. Today we went to the orchard to pick cherries (1). However, when we arrived (there) (2), there were already two bags of cherries. All of these had been picked by my father. He climbed up high using a ladder. I don’t know how to describe (3) my father’s love. But through these cherries, I want to say (show that) my father is the man who loves me the best (loves me the most?).
(1) You “pick up” something that is lying on the ground (e.g something you have dropped”. By contrast, you “pick strawberries”, “pick cherries”, “pick flowers”, etc. (2) It would sound more natural if you leave this“ there” out. It is clear where you mean. (3) I think he would express his love through his actions. And you would describe his love by talking about it.
June 11, 2021
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