Alice
昨天晚上我听了一件的podcast。她不留神使用公司的信用卡。虽然金额只是十美元,她被解雇了。 然后,她感到了强压。她买了很多日用东西用信用卡。她忘了家计费。 Last night I listened to podcast. She used her company’s credit card accidentally. Although the amount was only 10 dollars, she was terminated. She felt stressed out. She bought a lot of household supplies. She had forgot about household expenses.
Jun 17, 2021 1:59 AM
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昨天晚上我听了一件的podcast。她不留神使用公司的信用卡。虽然金额只是十美元,她被解雇了。 然后,她感到了强压。她买了很多日用东西用信用卡。她忘了家计费。 Last night I listened to podcast. She used her company’s credit card accidentally. Although the amount was only 10 dollars, she was terminated. She felt stressed out. She bought a lot of household supplites. She had forgot about household expenses. 昨天晚上,我听了一段音频。(故事中),她意外地使用了公司的信用卡。尽管只有十美元,但她还是被解雇了。她有了压力。她买了很多家庭日用品,(不过)她忘记了家庭预算。 #1,“podcast” does not need to translate. For example, people do not need to translate "skype", "zoom", and "whatsapp". #2,In order to better understand who you mentioned, it is good to clarify whether "SHE" is the character in the podcast story or in your reality, so it is clearer to add "attributive" - "In the story". #3,Chinese writing emphasizes logical relations, so it is necessary to add ". . . So ";“... because", "though" and "but " (因为...所以;虽然...但是), so that the article looks more fluent.
You did a good job! Well done!!! :)
June 17, 2021
昨天晚上我听了一个博客。她不留神使用了公司的信用卡。虽然金额只是十美元,但是她被解雇了。 然后,她感到了压力很大。她买了很多日用品,用来释放压力,她都已经忘了日常开销的事。 Last night I listened to podcast. She used her company’s credit card accidentally. Although the amount was only 10 dollars, she was terminated. She felt stressed out. She bought a lot of household supplies. She had forgot about household expenses.
June 17, 2021
昨天晚上我听了一个播客,里面提到一个女人的故事。这个女人无意中用了公司的信用卡。虽然金额只是十美元,但她还是被解雇了。 她感到压力很大。然后,她用信用卡买了很多日用品。虽然减了压,但她忘了考虑家庭开销的问题。 Last night I listened to podcast. She used her company’s credit card accidentally. Although the amount was only 10 dollars, she was terminated. She felt stressed out. She bought a lot of household supplies. She had forgot about household expenses.
Hi Alice,虽然你写的句子错误不多,但是我建议可以加一些说明 ,让文章显得更有逻辑:)
June 17, 2021
昨天晚上我听了一个播客。她无意间使用了公司的信用卡。虽然金额只有十美元,但她还是被解雇了。 她感到压力很大。她买了很多日用品,但是忘了考虑家庭开支的成本。 Last night I listened to podcast. She used her company’s credit card accidentally. Although the amount was only 10 dollars, she was terminated. She felt stressed out. She bought a lot of household supplies. She had forgot about household expenses.
June 17, 2021
昨天晚上我听了一段播客。里面讲述了一个人一不留神用公司的信用卡支付了账单。虽然金额只是十美元,但她因此被解雇了。 然后,她压力很大。她用信用卡买了很多日用品。她忘了考虑家庭支出。 Last night I listened to podcast. She used her company’s credit card accidentally. Although the amount was only 10 dollars, she was terminated. She felt stressed out. She bought a lot of household supplies. She had forgot about household expenses.
June 17, 2021
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