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I bought a smart watch last week. At first glance it looks useful, and attracts your attention. I bought it with my friend and we decided that we should start to exercise, because I realize that I got weight so much because of pandemic lockdown. When I tried to wear my T-shirts’ and short, I saw that my body was really in bad shape. So that I have started to make exercise since last Monday. But I searched good motivator to do this decision make real, and I found this smart watch. It is not only for my sporting activities but also helping my reminders. It warn me to not to forget drink water. However it helps me so much, I have some concerns about using it. As I am not good at technology, I thought that I bought it so much expensive. Finally, I want to share that it looks after my heart rate routinely, and announce when it detects upper limit. It will warn me not to push so much when I am exercising.
Jun 20, 2021 6:14 PM
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I bought a smart watch last week. At first glance it looks useful, and attracts your attention. I bought it with my friend and we decided that we should start to exercise, because I realized that I gained so much weight because of the pandemic lockdown. When I tried to wear my T-shirts’ and shorts, I saw that my body was in really bad shape. So I have started to exercise since last Monday. But I searched for a good motivator to apply this decision for real, and I found this smart watch. It is not only for my sporting activities but also helps with my reminders. It warns me not to forget to drink water. Although it helps me so much, I have some concerns about using it. As I am not good at technology, I thought that I bought it so expensive. Finally, I want to share that it looks after my heart rate routinely, and announces when it detects the upper limit. It will warn me not to push so hard when I am exercising.
good job!
June 20, 2021
I bought a smart watch last week. At first glance it looks useful, and attracts your attention. I bought it with my friend and we decided that we should start to exercise, because I realized that I put on a lot of weight because of the pandemic lockdown. When I tried to wear my T-shirts’ and shorts, I saw that my body was really in bad shape. So I have started exercising since last Monday. I searched for something to motivate me after I had made the decision to start exercising, and I found this smart watch. It is not only for my sporting activities but also helping me by giving me reminders. It warns me to not to forget to drink water. However although it helps me so much, I have some concerns about using it. As I am not good with technology, I thought that I spent too much money on it. Finally, I want to share that it looks after my heart rate routinely, and announces when it detects upper limit. It will warn me not to push too much when I am exercising.
to attract attention = easily understand your meaning but would choose a different word. Maybe “looks good” or “looks attractive”. Attract attention usually more like emphasising someone/people will really look or pay attention to something. For example: - If someone is hurt you would shout for help to attract attention - You should not wear expensive jewellery in this place so as not to attract the attention of a thief - When you want something in a restaurant you try to attract the waiter’s attention The sentences you are using are really complex, I would love to speak another language this well. I understood everything without any effort, the corrections are just little refinements that is all 😁
June 20, 2021
I bought a smartwatch last week. At a glance, it looks useful and attractive to your attention. I bought it with my friend and we decided to start exercising/workout to lose weight which I gained/acquired due to taking rest/leisure during a pandemic. When I try to wear the T-shirts and shorts, it doesn't fit properly due to in bad body shape/posture. So since last Monday, I have started exercising. I found a good motivator to accomplish my goal(of weight loss) in the form of this smartwatch ( I think I have changed your thoughts here so consider it). It does not only help me in sporting activities but also in setting my daily reminders. It notifies to drink plenty of water. However it helps me so much, I have some concerns about using it. As I am not good at technology, I thought that I bought it much expensive. Finally, it also counts my heart rate, and announce/ tell/notifies when it detects the upper limit. It warns me not to get exhausted while exercising(or set time or limit to perform it).
Sounds cool! You have a very beneficial watch. I have made some corrections. Ask if you have any doubts:)
June 20, 2021
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