Well done! I totally understand getting dizzy after watching the new Star Wars films. Some children's films are much easier to enjoy, don't you think? I recommend "Coco", if you haven't already seen it. In your writing, you sometimes don't mention the subject explicitly, insted saying "ones for kids" or "it's made into movies". This can make things a little unclear and confusing for English speakers. On the other hand, I'm currently having trouble learning Japanese where you don't always have to say the subject of a sentence 😅 I don't know if there's a rule in English for when you have to say the subject, but I think it helps if the subject is the most recent thing named in the previous sentence. For example, let's say you write: "The car lost a tyre after hitting a boulder. It rolled down the hill". The reader might be confused. Which is rolling: the tyre, the car, or the boulder? It helps to clarify, if you can, in the second sentence. Great job again with the writing. Since lockdown ended here in Melbourne, I haven't watched many films, but you've inspired me to get back into it. Maybe I'll look for one of the Kamen Rider movies 😝