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can you help me to point out the mistakes in the following sentences ?MANY THANKS!

The policies are launched to serve this goal include health care for the poor, supporting poor students, support production land, residential land, clean water for ethnic minorities, vocational training, employment, labor export, housing assistance for the poor, preferential credit, legal aid for the poor ... Besides being the specific policies for each region.

Nov 25, 2015 2:41 PM
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Can you help me to by pointing out the mistakes in the following sentences ?

The policies are launched to serve this goal include :  health care for the poor, supporting poor students, support for production from land, residential land, clean water for ethnic minorities, vocational training, employment, labor export, housing assistance for the poor, preferential credit, legal aid for the poor ... besides being the specific policies for each region.

November 26, 2015

The policies are launched to serve this goal include health care for the poor, supporting poor students, support production land, residential land, clean water for ethnic minorities, vocational training, employment, labor export, housing assistance for the poor, preferential credit, legal aid for the poor ... Besides being the specific policies for each region.

 

The policies HAVE BEEN DEVELOPED / the policies HAVE BEEN IMPLEMENTED to serve this goal, AND AFFECT/IMPACT health care for the poor, SUPPORT FOR UNDER-FINANCED students, support OF production AND RESIDENTIAL land; THE PROVISION OF clean water for ethnic minorities; vocational training, employment, labor export, housing assistance for the poor, preferential credit, legal aid for the poor ... Besides being the specific policies for each region.

[I am not sure what the underlined sentence means. Does it mean "and are the specific policies for each region OR in addition to the specific policies for each region.]


Because several of the policies are related to the poor, it might be best to include them together, e.g.:

The policies HAVE BEEN DEVELOPED / the policies HAVE BEEN IMPLEMENTED to serve this goal, AND AFFECT/IMPACT health care for the poor, housing assistance for the poor, legal aid for the poor, SUPPORT FOR UNDER-FINANCED students, support OF production AND RESIDENTIAL land; THE PROVISION OF clean water for ethnic minorities; vocational training, employment, labor export, AND preferential credit. 


Hope this helps...

November 25, 2015

Thank you for your help ! It is very useful for me.

November 26, 2015