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This song is sung by me! Can any English speaker make any comments?

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I'm sick today and my voice changed. Sang this song, trying my new voice.

Dec 30, 2015 2:06 AM
Comments · 13

@aegis,

Well, it's helpful if you could list the pronunciation problems.  I'm always looking forward to improving myself.

February 25, 2016

@aegis,


I listened again as you got me curious. I wouldn't say there were many pronunciation problems; some yes, many? No. In many English songs, I cannot make out what the singers are singing. How many songs in English do not have perfect pronunciation? A lot.


I think much of the pronunciation here follows the original song. Whether you can extrapolate that to this person having many problems with pronunciation as you imply is a bit far.

February 24, 2016

You have some skill, and could become a good singer. But you were out of tune more than once, and you had many pronunciation problems.

February 24, 2016

@Learner SC - I see you've worded your post in such a way that even if I listed the pronunciation problems, of which there are many, you would discount them as being artistic license or something. Well done!

February 24, 2016

I've never heard this song before. I could not understand what you were saying in the beginning. Your pronunciation was better in the middle and end. Not bad, but you need to work on your pronunciation.

December 30, 2015
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