Luca
can you correct me this letter for erasmus?
I'm an Architectual student (Graduated in Ambiental Architecture) and this letter explains the reasons behind my choice to partecipate in the Erasmus Program. First of all I think that an experience of abroad study is necessary for a good attainment, especially for an architect, Study abroad means comparison whith other peaple, other ideas, other traditions; today the circulation of ideas is the basis of modern labour economics. Borders are no longer physical; today borders are cultural, but these borders are no longer barriers, they are a surplus value. Learn to cross these borders is necessary and the Erasmus program is one of the ways. I like travelling and I like to discover new realities. About my choice of location for Erasmus I put Aachen in the first place becouse this city is in my opinion one of the European “Capital” of history and architecture Germn architecture was really important for my preparation and i think that study in this city is great opportunity to confront my idea of architecture whith German one.
Jan 28, 2016 3:09 PM
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I'm an Architectual student (Graduated in Ambiental Architecture) and this letter explains the reasons behind my choice to partIcipate in the Erasmus Program. First of all I think that an experience of STUDY abroad study is necessary for a good attainment, especially for an architect. Study abroad means comparison with other people, other ideas, other traditions; today the circulation of ideas is the basis of modern labour economics. Borders are no longer physical; today borders are cultural, but these borders are no longer barriers, they are a surplus value. LearnINGto cross these borders is necessary and the Erasmus program is one of the ways. I like traveling and I like to discover new realities. About my choice of location for Erasmus I put Aachen in the first place becAuse this city is in my opinion one of the European “CapitalS” of history and architecture GermAn architecture was really important for my preparation and i think that study in this city is great opportunity to confront my idea of architecture with the German one.

Ok, I've done a first pass, I've put in capitals where I've added letters or highlighted where I saw change was needed.  But there are some words in here which don't make sense to me and you need to think about

Ambiental,attainment, surplus value,realities

January 28, 2016