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I had a full day at my work. I woke up early in the morning to do my things  but I was too tired and I got to work late - which was bad for me because  I work better in the morning. I took my car, went to my client's - I work as a salesman - and when I'd achieved* my first client, he didn't want to buy anything because he hadn't sold his goods well last week. This got me upset.  I thought, 'man, I don't like to start a day like this, it sucks'

I will finish here because my day gots better since this one BAD client. Hope someone could point out my mistakes on this text.

* I'd probably say something like "met with" rather than "achieved."  When I met with my first client...