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Lucas
Work day at São Paulo Hi guys!

I had a full day at my work. I woke  up early in the moorning to do my things  but I was too tired and I've got late to work - wich was bad for me because  I work better in the moorning. I took my car, went to my clients - I work as sallesman - and when I'd achieved my first client, he didn't want buy anything because he hadn't sell his goods well last week. This got upset me, I thought 'Man, I don't like to start a day like this, it's sucks'

I will finish here, because my day gots better since this one BAD client. Hope someone could point my mistakes on this text
Jul 12, 2016 10:18 PM
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July 12, 2016

Hi guys!

I had a full day at my work. I woke up early in the morning to do my things  but I was too tired and I got to work late - which was bad for me because  I work better in the morning. I took my car, went to my client's - I work as a salesman - and when I'd achieved* my first client, he didn't want to buy anything because he hadn't sold his goods well last week. This got me upset.  I thought, 'man, I don't like to start a day like this, it sucks'

I will finish here because my day gots better since this one BAD client. Hope someone could point out my mistakes on this text.

I'd probably say something like "met with" rather than "achieved."  When I met with my first client...

July 12, 2016
Lucas
Language Skills
English, Portuguese
Learning Language
English