Hi, Melissa: Here's my recommendation for your passage. You can take a look to see if it matches what you're thinking. Good luck!
Every woman in the world has the right to make her own decisions such as having a job, going into business, getting married, and/or having children. Likewise, a woman should have the freedom to choose not to do any of these things that might be expected of her in order to conform to a particular set of societal norms. In western countries, it is easier for women than in eastern countries where many women live repressed lives. Nevertheless, women have continued to courageously struggle to reach equality. The most important thing is to not lose faith that someday everything will be different.
All the best,
I am not good at English
what do you mean by testimonie?