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Melissa Zuleika
Could somebody help me with my writing? Every woman in the world have the right to take her own decisions like have a job and be a business woman, get married and have children or in the opposite doesn't do it. In west countries is easier for us (womens) than the east countries, where the most women live repressed, but this life testimonie show the courage and continuous struggle to reach the equality. The most important thing is to continue and not lose faith that someday everything will be different.
Jul 15, 2016 9:35 PM
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Hi, Melissa:  Here's my recommendation for your passage.  You can take a look to see if it matches what you're thinking.  Good luck!


Every woman in the world has the right to make her own decisions such as having a job,  going into business, getting married, and/or having children.  Likewise, a woman should have the freedom to choose not to do any of these things that might be expected of her in order to conform to a particular set of societal norms.  In western countries, it is easier for women than in eastern countries where many women live repressed lives.  Nevertheless, women have continued to courageously struggle to reach equality.  The most important thing is to not lose faith that someday everything will be different.           

All the best,

Pearl

July 15, 2016
Every woman in the world has the right to make her own decisions like having a job and being a business woman, getting married and having children or the opposite of not doing so. In Western countries it's easier for us (womens) than in Eastern countries, where the most women live repressed, but the current testimony shows the courage and continuous struggle to reach the equality. The most important thing is to continue and not lose faith that someday everything will be different.
July 15, 2016

I am not good at English 

what do you mean by testimonie?

July 15, 2016
Melissa Zuleika
Language Skills
English, Spanish
Learning Language
English