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CatherineKing
How to write self-assessment

I have been working in a large foreign listed company. I was familiar with the new third board and IPO process and policy with the recognition of new and hi-tech enterprised and Accounting treatment. I had experience in financing, mergers and acquisitions of list companies and good foreign enterprise financial management. For tax planning within the group, set up internal transfer price, reasonable tax burden reduce group , ensure that group tax burden to a minimum. Proficiency in using ERP, SAP, KINGDEE software and EXCEL functions. The company information in English at all, good English reading and writing. Good communication skills, the ability of team organization, self-improvement, independence .

Aug 8, 2016 12:07 AM
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Hi Catherine,


The font is too small to read. I had to zoom in the screen first before I was able to read it, this can make people disinterested, seeing they have to read something this small and then analyze something they didn't expect. Perhaps, you could edit this and enlarge the font size 6-10 points.


After reading the text, it made some sense to me as to what it was trying to convey, but it was not convincing me of good grammar, and often the sentence structure is weird looking; “The company information in English at all”, for example.


I don't know if you want people to correct this. If you do, I suggest you post this in notebook entries, whereas someone often receives multiple corrections to choose the best.

August 9, 2016
CatherineKing
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), English
Learning Language
English