Hi everyone, I'm Lucas from France.

I currently work in Paris and i'd like to work abroad soon. I'd like to apply to a job offer in Singapour, would someone be avaliable to check one of my work cover letter? I'd be glad to help if you need help in french in exchange.

Here's my cover letter. Thanks a lot for your help :

Dear Sir or Madam,

Currently working at [Société] as an [Poste], I am taking the opportunity to contact you as I am highly interested in a the VIE position in the [Nom] department.

Graduated from a Master's degree at [Ecole] in july 2015, I have a two years apprentiship experience at [Société], as a bank's corporate customers analyst and as a firms credit analyst, which helped me understand the banking mechanisms.
My current experience as an [Poste] at [Société] gives me opportunity to develop my analytical mind and deepen my comprehension of the mecanism of the banking system. Furthermore, this experience enables me to to apprehend the audit methodology, as well in the management of the interviews and the investigations, as in the writing of the audit reports.

Armed with this experience, I'm willing to pursuie my evolution in the challenging environment of [Société], by evolving in an international environment.
I would like to have the opportunity to discuss with you more in detail about this VIE position. Please feel free to contact me at your convenience to discuss about this position.

Best regards,