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Can anyboby help me with my english text?

Hello! I wrote a little text for my exam. Please, help me to correct mistakes! 

Let me introduce myself. My name is V. I am a 22 years old. This year I received a specialist diploma with the qualification of Literature Worker, but I wished to continue studying. That's why I go to graduate school.

I love languages: now I learn English and recently I started to learn French. I’m not good in it, but I’m trying. And now I can say something simple phrases in French. In addition to that, I’m interested in linguistics. I like to read about history research of languages, theories, and hypothesis. Above all, I am interested the psycholinguistics, stylistics, syntax and something other sections. And, of course, I love to read imaginative literature and understand the way that its make. Because sometimes I write myself, I want to know, how wrote great authors.

All this determined the theme of my future dissertation work: “The role of syntax in the stories by Alexander Grin”. It includes the study stylistic devices, features using resources of language. I will try to prove syntax’s importance in stories’ interpretation and perception.

But it concerns not only Grin’s prose. In my opinion, the perception of any texts depends on combinations of words and predicate parts in the sentences, word order, punctuation marks, especially the commons and dash. But in the oeuvre by Grin it is illustrated very well. Grin's works, in fact, have a universal appeal, deals with human desires and emotions in their most pure form. So, the way he uses language’s recourses becomes very important and delicate.

The purpose of a research dissertation consists in developing the scientific basis and methods using syntax in a literary work and its impact on the perception of the reader, I think that while I was learning, I got an important experience of research work.

Sep 9, 2016 1:25 PM
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Thank you very much!
September 9, 2016

The purpose of a research dissertation consists of developing the scientific basis and methods using syntax in a literary work and its impact on the perception of the reader, I think that while I was learning that I got an important experience of research work.


(Sorry I couldn't add the whole thing in one text, this is the last sentence in what you wrote)

September 9, 2016
Let me introduce myself, my name is V. and I am 22 years old. This year I received a Specialist diploma with the qualification of Literature Worker, but I wish to continue studying, that's why I am going to graduate school. I love languages, right now I am learning English and recently I started to learn French too. I’m not good in it but I’m trying, and now I can say some simple phrases in French, and in addition to that I’m interested in linguistics. I like to read about history research of languages, theories, and hypothesizes, but above all I am interested the psycholinguistics, stylistics, syntax and some other sections. Of course I also love to read imaginative literature and understand the way that it's made, because sometimes I like to write myself and I want to know how write to great authors. All of this is determined by the theme of my future dissertation work, “The Role of Syntax"  in the stories by Alexander Grin, it includes the study stylistic devices, and features using resources of language. I will try to prove syntax’s importance in stories’ interpretation and perception. It concerns not only Grin’s prose in my opinion because  the perception of any texts depends on combinations of words and predicate parts in the sentences, word order, and punctuation marks, especially the commas and dashes. In the Oeuvre by Grin it is illustrated very well, Grin's works in fact has a universal appeal, it deals with human desires and emotions in their most pure form, so the way he uses language’s recourses becomes very important and delicate.
September 9, 2016
Nika, sure thing no problem!
September 9, 2016
Nika
Language Skills
English, Russian
Learning Language
English