so, when it started raining he entered stella's house to not get wet
_not to get wet.
Hi, there are some flaws; you would better post corrections into "Notebook".
Any mistakes = any mistake
She first thought = ♫ At first, she thought
She run outside = She ran outside
other noises were heard coming from the garage = ♫ other noises came from the garage
immediatly = immediat-e-ly
helped him find = helped him TO find // helped him finding
she fell happy to have helped the kid = she FELT happy of ♫ having helped the kid