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Does this sound unnatural or awkward in English?
When it comes to bug problems, I love having a natural solution before turning to DEET or any other chemical.  

I take this matter very seriously since as abioanalyst and mother I am very aware of all the viruses, parasites and bacteria that insects carry and the type of risk that can mean for my family.

Sep 11, 2016 10:52 PM
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Great job, Natalia. It doesn't sound awkward at all.  Just one small correction, in the second paragraph. "As a bioanalyst."  

Keep up the good work.  This sounds like something I would read in a blog or parenting magazine!

September 11, 2016
Hi Melinda, thank you so much for your encouraging comments and for answering my question :-)
September 11, 2016
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