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Could you help me to correct the following article? Thank you! The advantage of writing

The advantage of writing is that, firstly, writing is just like an interesting journey which can help us to explore something around us. It can do brain training and find out our deep insights, which can help us to know ourselves well. 

Secondly, writing can also practice your expressing ability in another language. In addition, no matter what you write, you need some information and inspiration from a lot of reading and accumulating in your daily life, which will encourage us to expand the amount of reading and extend view toward different topics. I believe that the depth of thought is determined by the range of information you have absorbed.

Thirdly, writing cannot only share your idea with others, but also let you know yourselves well, which will help you to get rid of loneliness and confusion.

All in all, interests is our best teacher. No matter as a professional English learner, or just a amateur, if you love what you do, you will persist to spend your time and efforts on it. Even if you encounter some difficulties on the path, maybe you will have a rest but you will not give up halfway easily. Because you will try your best to overcome it and then you can have a great achievement after you experience these moments.
Sep 21, 2016 2:25 PM
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Nice and interesting article:)

I liked the way it has written.Some sentences I liked are--

The advantage of writing is that, firstly, writing is just like an interesting journey which can help us to explore something around us. It can do brain training and find out our deep insights, which can help us to know ourselves well. 

I believe that the depth of thought is determined by the range of information you have absorbed.

writing cannot only share your idea with others, but also let you know yourselves well, which will help you to get rid of loneliness and confusion.

Thank you for sharing:)





September 21, 2016
LoveT8
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), English
Learning Language
English