Grace Grace
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Some people fare that technology is gradually taking over control of our lives, while other think that it had led to many positive development in all aspects of their lives. Discuss both view and give your opinion.<o:p></o:p>

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We are living in the 20<sup>th</sup> century, the age of technology. There is always a race on technology development among countries all over the world. A great number of people are afraid that technology is becoming out of human’s management. Others, including me, however, believe that technology have brought our lives a variety of advantages.<o:p></o:p>

Technology has led people to a new world that they can do what they used to consider as impossible. People believe that successful inventions on robot industry, nuclear, so on are able to lead threats for human being.  People currently make robots having ability to do work as a human; even they proceed more accurate and productive. Anyone can ensure that robot will replace people in one day modeling by some scientific movies. Nuclear power industry development has been supposed as one of the most dangerous for our lives. It is admitted that technology has been breaking our expectation.<o:p></o:p>

Owning to the exploration of technology and its great achievements, our lives has become better. The more technology knowledge you have, the more productive your work is. With a powerful technology, countries enhance economy, relieve the poverty as well as improve living standard. It also helps our live more interesting with a plenty of entertainments. We can travel around the world with just a computer, contact with everyone on the planet by the internet. In fact, technology has been one part of our live.<o:p></o:p>

In conclusion, in spite of threats technology should be strengthening in order to make our lives marvelous. We together can find solutions to manage its development. I believe that we can create and also can damage it.<o:p></o:p>

Mar 15, 2017 2:54 AM
Comments · 2

Hi Magalhaes, I don't know :( I can copy it when I open on Chrome. Or you can write your comment here. Please help me :)


March 15, 2017

Hi Grace Grace,

Something really weird is happening with your post. It does not show the button for correction does not show up and you cannot copy and paste (at least not on my Firefox). Please try again. :)

-PJ

March 15, 2017