Hi, trying to make the description to the app. Does it sounds natural?

Immerse yourself in old school platformer of adventures of red ball. The most popular Nokia game is now available on your smartphone!

If you are a child of 90’s or 00’s you are probably have spent lots of hours playing the original Bounce Ball game on your old push-button Nokia.

You need to avoid prickles, go through water and maze using mysterious devices, which change the gravity, and you also need to collect golden rings to be able to go to the next level. Are you capable of pass all levels?

Mar 19, 2017 11:48 PM
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We do not use NOKIA phones, millet phone or HUAWEI phone
March 20, 2017
pleasure :)
March 20, 2017
Thanks a lot :) "do you miss.." is the good idea.
March 20, 2017

mmmmm well, you can begin your advertisement/ description by an excitement introduction, for example, but not limited to, ( do you miss your old games/ do you miss the games of your childhood/ do you miss your old phone games?, then you transfer to the interesting part and say ( our app brings to you your old games on your smartphone, Then you can mention the characteristics of your app and challenge him/ her to pass all levels or win the game and so on.

What I said are just suggestions, hope I could benefit you more, good luck.

March 20, 2017
How? It's not that easy if it's not your natural language :( Could you give me some advice? 
March 20, 2017
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