Katia
Can someone tell me if this text make sense ?

First of all, to him, the most important thing is to protect the jobs of the Americans, ensure their security and fight against the drug trafficking. In order to fight against illegal immigration, he wanted to close totally the borders with Mexico. Mexicans come to America espacially to find a job. There already have a fence between USA and Mexico, which spans almost 670 miles. But the fence was not totally impassable because some Americans sometimes let Mexicans enter their territory only for a cheaper workforce. Trump want expand and strengthen the fence, although the cost of his project is astronomical. Therefore he said that he is going to build a huge and impenetrable fence, with a lot of surveillance technologies, and he added that it is<font color="#333333" style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman", serif;"> </font><font color="#333333" style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman", serif;">It is Mexico that will pay everything.</font><font color="#000000"><font face="Times New Roman, serif"><font style="font-size: 12pt">However, people dooesn’t emigrate in America only to find a job, but also to find a better life or even, to survive, to instance Syrian people who try to escape the war in their country. Trump say that it is necessary to protect the security of the nation, </font></font></font><font color="#000000"><font face="Times New Roman, serif"><font style="font-size: 12pt">especially against the </font></font></font><font color="#000000"><font face="Times New Roman, serif"><font style="font-size: 12pt">terroris</font></font></font><font color="#000000"><font face="Times New Roman, serif"><font style="font-size: 12pt">t</font></font></font><font color="#000000"><font face="Times New Roman, serif"><font style="font-size: 12pt"> attacks</font></font></font><font color="#000000"><font face="Times New Roman, serif"><font style="font-size: 12pt">. </font></font></font><font color="#000000"><font face="Times New Roman, serif"><font style="font-size: 12pt">According to him</font></font></font><font color="#000000"><font face="Times New Roman, serif"><font style="font-size: 12pt">, the best solution </font></font></font><font color="#000000"><font face="Times New Roman, serif"><font style="font-size: 12pt">for that </font></font></font><font color="#000000"><font face="Times New Roman, serif"><font style="font-size: 12pt">is to forbid </font></font></font><font color="#000000"><font face="Times New Roman, serif"><font style="font-size: 12pt">people </font></font></font><font color="#000000"><font face="Times New Roman, serif"><font style="font-size: 12pt">of some countries </font></font></font><font color="#000000"><font face="Times New Roman, serif"><font style="font-size: 12pt">enter the USA. Indeed, he has signed a</font></font></font><font color="#000000"><font face="Times New Roman, serif"><font style="font-size: 12pt">n executive order</font></font></font><font color="#000000"><font face="Times New Roman, serif"><font style="font-size: 12pt"> fobiding </font></font></font><font color="#000000"><font face="Times New Roman, serif"><font style="font-size: 12pt">people who came </font></font></font><font color="#000000"><font face="Times New Roman, serif"><font style="font-size: 12pt">of</font></font></font><font color="#000000"><font face="Times New Roman, serif"><font style="font-size: 12pt"> 7 </font></font></font><font color="#000000"><font face="Times New Roman, serif"><font style="font-size: 12pt">muslim</font></font></font><font color="#000000"><font face="Times New Roman, serif"><font style="font-size: 12pt"> countries to come in USA : </font></font></font><font color="#000000"><font face="Times New Roman, serif"><font style="font-size: 12pt">Iran, Iraq, Yemen, Soudan, Somalie, Syria, Libya. </font></font></font><font face="Times New Roman, serif"><font style="font-size: 12pt">But t</font></font><font face="Times New Roman, serif"><font style="font-size: 12pt">he Supreme Court has declared that the action of Trump about </font></font><font face="Times New Roman, serif"><font style="font-size: 12pt">this executive order</font></font><font face="Times New Roman, serif"><font style="font-size: 12pt"> is unconstitutionnal </font></font><font face="Times New Roman, serif"><font style="font-size: 12pt">because it’s too excessive.</font></font><font face="Times New Roman, serif"><font style="font-size: 12pt"> So the judiciary </font></font><font face="Times New Roman, serif"><font style="font-size: 12pt">power </font></font><font face="Times New Roman, serif"><font style="font-size: 12pt">has striken down this unconstitutionnal law</font></font><font face="Times New Roman, serif"><font style="font-size: 12pt">.</font></font>

Mar 26, 2017 11:02 AM
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There are lots of little mistakes in there - typos, missing prepositions, wrong verb forms, French names of countries. But overall, I'd say that yes, the text does make sense. :)
March 26, 2017