Brittany
Short Story Challenge!
Do you need practice writing in the past-tense? Then write a short story! Your story must begin with “Last night I heard a strange noise.” Tell us what happened! If you don’t need practice, but like to write short stories for fun, please join in! All are welcome to participate. 
Mar 31, 2017 12:24 PM
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Yes sure, I would be happy if you would correct me)
March 31, 2017
Ok, if a story then the story, but sorry for my English before. Last night I heard a strange noise. I was sleeping when I heard sounds like "tik tik.....tik tik". at first, I thought it was a dream. But I found it out very strange. I opened my eyes but sounds still continued. I went around whole my flat and nothing but sounds still continued. I said stop to myself. I became to listen and figured out sounds was behind a window. I opened a window and saw a poor car on a parking with the active car alarm. But the car battery was almost off and the alarm hadn't already power for creating a loud sound only like "tik tik.....tik tik". I calmed down and went to my warm bed. This is my a little real story)))
March 31, 2017
If I write the short story, Can you help me correct it?
March 31, 2017
<ul class="list-inline text-light-gray no-margin-b"><li style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">Hi <a ui-sref="user({id:comment.commenter_obj.id})" href="https://www.italki.com/user/4006709" style="outline: 0px;">Nguyễn Thị Thu Hương</a>! If you write the story,  I will help you correct it! If anyone else would like corrections, let me know! </li></ul>
March 31, 2017
Haha! Great, job Edward! Thanks for sharing. I hope you were able to get back to sleep :) If you would like me to send you corrections, I'd be happy to help. 
March 31, 2017