Is there anything wrong with the following sentence?

It’s a practice that some movies struggle to do, with many either getting too enthusiastic about showing their big plot points, and others simply not catching the magic of the movie.
Apr 24, 2017 6:11 AM
Comments · 3
Good point -- it is indeed illogical, albeit perfectly understandable.
April 24, 2017
Is there anything wrong with "either... and others"?
April 24, 2017
The only problem is that we never say to "do a practice." We might (if appropriate) be able to use "emulate," or simply rewrite the sentence.
April 24, 2017