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Evik Ck
Proofreading of one paragraph Hello, could anyone help me to correct an abstract of my diploma thesis?
Mar 6, 2018 3:25 PM
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This diploma thesis deals with issues of xx employee motivation. It describes the latest happenings in the labour market and clarifies the importance of a company’s (familiarity with)awareness of the reasons why employees leave. The theoretical part gets us acquaints us with the needs and satisfaction of employees, and the way these can be accomplished. This information is applied on the motivation system of the travel agency Invia.cz. The aim of this diploma thesis is to analyse and to suggest some solutionfor the (betterment) improvement of the motivational atmosphere in the company. The survey was used for analysis. 

I do not think plagiarists hang around italki waiting for specific thesis themes.

March 6, 2018
Hey, you made the effort to write it and then just used your initiative!
March 6, 2018
Thank you very much :)
And the plagiarism... I ment when my school will check my work, it could be a problem if they found it.
March 6, 2018

I know. I didn't want to post it on the Internet if it is not necessary because of plagiarism. But here it is:

This diploma thesis deals with issues of an employee motivation. It describes latest happenings on the labor market and clarify the importance of company’s familiarity with reasons why employees leave. The theoretical part gets us acquaint with needs and satisfaction of employees, and the way it can be accomplished. These information are applied on motivation system of travel agency Invia.cz. Aim of this diploma thesis is to analyze and to suggest some solution for betterment of the motivational atmosphere in the company. The survey was used for analysis.

March 6, 2018
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March 6, 2018
Evik Ck
Language Skills
Czech, English, German, Italian
Learning Language
English, German, Italian