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Olga
Could you help me pls. I have to practice write a letter for IELTS. I need someone who can check. Appreciate.

You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.  Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter.

·        Describe the situation

·        Explain your problems and why it is difficult to work

Say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

 Dear Sir  or Madam, 

   I am writing to let you know that my life in my room after my new housemate move in is absolutely horrible. Since my old friend extremely left out our room I live with new one whose name is Jack. He always stays up late and talking to phone laud and disturb me.

    Let me explain my situation. I have to write diplomas work unless I am going to be expelled from university. My new housemate doesn’t considerate, he is almost every night talking to different people, speaks lough, sometimes even fight, screaming to someone. It is make me tired and powerless to do my work. I have tried to ask him about help me to concentrate on my writing, but he wasn’t listen.

    Would you kindly help me to solve my problem? I suggest you to transfer me or my housemate to another room. I really don’t mind to whom I’ll live with, the task is calm and respect person.  

   Thank you for your consideration.

  Yours faithfully,

  Olga

Mar 17, 2018 8:17 PM
Comments · 2
Before I go through everything, can I ask what grade you're hoping to achieve? 4.0, 4.5, 5 etc?
March 17, 2018
Hi Daniel , I need at least 6. I have only  3 month for practice. 
March 17, 2018
Olga
Language Skills
English, Ukrainian
Learning Language
English