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Olga
Hello. Could you pls read my essay and give feedback.. i have to practice before pass exam. Appreciate.

Considering that adults spend much of their lives at work, having job satisfaction is extremely important.

What factors contribute to job satisfaction?

How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all employees?

 

    Today is very important to have less stress, because under presser we could lost a job or even to catch healthy problem. Unfortunately, almost all our stress we get from our work. This why extremely important to be satisfaction at work, as long as our job contain much of human lives. This essay will discuss what factors could contribute to job satisfaction, also how realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all employees.

      We all know that only satisfaction at work person can achieve fully success. There are several factors which could provide job satisfaction. First and the most important thing is love what you do. Doesn’t matter how excellent or poor your duties, you have to love what you do, otherwise change job profile. In the second place much value consist to make a different at your work, in order that to get respect from collaboration. The last but not the least is to get enough remuneration.  At work where you have got plenty money, respect from colleagues and job of your love there are have no place for stress, which mean full satisfaction.

      However, job satisfaction is absolutely personal thing. If you ask my opinion, I would say I don’t believe in job satisfaction for all employees in ordinary large company. Someone could wish to achieve higher position in company, other just wait till six p.m. to go to home. It is almost not realistic job satisfaction for all employees, nevertheless, the CEO of the company will be really interested in it. Than manager could request to hire people who are looking in one direction, so that can lead to more chance to expectation of job satisfaction for all employees. 

      To be satisfaction at work means for me have no stress at all. For example, I changed three times my professional in absolutely different direction until I realize what is important for me, what I love to do. This essay discussed three important factors contribute to job satisfaction, and measure chance the expectation of job satisfaction for all employees.

 

P.S. my goal is 7.  

Mar 26, 2018 12:16 PM
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Hi Olga

 You can check your own work by using Grammarly.com  The red underlines show errors that Grammarly find.  Then read your work out loud.  That is often how you spot errors, it just doesn´t sound right or flow properly.

Then you can find sample answers to the question here https://www.ielts-mentor.com/writing-sample/writing-task-2/1216-ielts-writing-task-2-sample-291-how-realistic-is-the-expectation-of-job-satisfaction-for-all-workers 




March 26, 2018
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March 26, 2018
Sharon Ruis thank you so much. I will do it.
March 26, 2018
Olga
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