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Cristina
On the boulevard of broken dreams


"I am a complicated person and I realize that remaining beside me is a huge challenge. I know well that, sometimes, it would be difficult to understand me. I usually have long and alone periods of silences where anybody is allowed to disturb. I have uncontrollable tears difficult to decode. My sensibility is as developed as there is nothing that can harm me or break me into many tiny pieces. As a summer storm, I am sudden and unexpected, swift and unpredictable. I am as colourful as confetti and as fragile as a soap bubble. I do need someone who knows the way to overcome my protective suit of armour. That one who knows how go further from my simple wild appareance. A person who has the strength to love me even if I am wrapped in thorns. Someone who wants to fight together and has the enough patience to heal my wounds."


To put in practice my English I decided to take any text in Spanish and then, do a translation.
Hope you like the text and my translation. I will add the text below, in case you want to read the original one. :)
Would you do it differently?
I cannot wait to read other versions.

Mar 28, 2018 9:50 PM
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"I consider myself to be a complicated person and I realise that to remain by my side is a huge challenge. I know well that, sometimes, it can be difficult to understand me. I usually have long solitary silent periods during which nobody is allowed to disturb me. I sometimes cry inconsolably which others find confusing. My invulnerability is such that  nothing can harm me or break/shatter me (into many tiny pieces). I am as swift and unpredictable as a sudden summer storm. I am as colourful as confetti and as fragile as a soap bubble. I do need someone who knows how to penetrate my protective suit of armour; The one who is able to see beyond my wild appearance. A person who has the strength to love me though their flesh be torn by thorns . Someone who wants to fight beside me and has the necessary patience to heal my wounds."
March 28, 2018

I didn't make an attempt to correct your entry because I'm not a native speaker of English. But here's my attempt:

I am a complicated person and I have realized that staying beside me is a huge challenge.
I well know that sometimes it could be difficult to understand me.
Usually, I have long periods of silence and solitude when nobody should disturb me.
I have uncontrollable fears that are difficult to decipher. (I assumed you meant fears, not tears. Was I right to assume that it was a typo?)
My sensibility has developed so much that nothing can harm me or break me into tiny pieces anymore.
Like a summer storm, I am sudden and unexpected, swift and unpredictable.
I am as colorful as confetti and as fragile as a soap bubble.
I need someone who knows the way to overcome my protective suit of armor.
The one who knows how to see beyond my simple wild appearance.
A person who has the strength to love me even if I am wrapped in thorns.
Someone who wants to fight together and has enough patience to heal my wounds.

Plus, a soap is not fragile. It's slippy. :D Also, I didn't quite understand the meaning of the third line.

EDIT: you have written "a soap bubble", not a soap. I take back my criticism. :P

You are talented at writing. :) +1 for your title. :P

March 28, 2018

@sum1.new4u Thanks for your message, even though you have not make any effort to translate with your own words :P

Yes, I really like it. And this text make me think in that song... kind of nostalgic, lonely while romantic. 

March 28, 2018
Cristina, you cannot translate word for word. You have to take a sentence and try to express the general meaning in English.
March 28, 2018
Sorry for straying from the topic, but do you happen to be a Green Day fan? :P :D I'm asking this because of the title you have chosen. :D
March 28, 2018
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Cristina
Language Skills
Catalan, English, French, Portuguese, Spanish
Learning Language
English, French, Portuguese