"Speaking of amount of time that i tighted up my budget i want to talk about what was happen 2 years ago.
actually, in this time i had to write an essay about a Vietnamese historian in English. i didnt know what i was going to do because everything was still up in the air. Then i always stayed up with oil and tryed my best to resive all nessery lessons. i devoted time to finding the information on the internet too. finally i passed my exam with flying color making my parent prouded of me then my mother decided to award me a considerable sum of money and allowed me buy an useful good and you know i always think about a dreaming phone: the Iphone X. Unluckyly my rewarding was deficient which was the reason why i had a parttime job.
i chose being a tutor over being a staff of a fashion shop. after 4 months a little girl' mother was very thankful to me for Math score of her daughter growing steeply and i earned enough money to complete my plan."
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