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Ian
Is this grammar right??? I've had the opportunity to do some research and I found three points that you cultivate international talents and strengthen students' English listening、speaking、reading and writing abilities, build up students' professional knowledge. Your teachers almost have the identity of higher education. You have many sister schools and have the 2+2 program, we can get the double degree. On the basis of the above reasons, making me more determined that I want to enter your department.
Apr 7, 2018 10:09 AM
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Hi Ian,


I will see if  I can help you with this some:

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I've had the opportunity to do some research and I found three points that are very interesting: you cultivate international talents and strengthen students' English listening、speaking、reading and writing abilities, and build up students' professional knowledge. Your teachers almost all have the identity of higher education. You have many sister schools and have the 2+2 program, which means we can get a the double degree. On the basis of the above reasons, I am making me more determined that I want to enter your department.

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I hope this helps you!

Regards,

DS3

April 7, 2018

Thank you 

But I am not this mean.

April 7, 2018
Ian
Language Skills
Chinese (Taiwanese), English, Russian, Ukrainian, Vietnamese
Learning Language
English, Russian, Ukrainian, Vietnamese