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Karine
Brazilian Carnivall samba plot PART ONE - Double check

Hi!

I am currently liing in China and need to make a presentation about Brazilian Carnival. I`ve just finished this free style translation and I`d really appreciate some double check. Many thanks in advance! :)


The Serrano Empire in the silk road


"I trust in the green and write[1]/They give me a safe path where I can reign/Empire of monumental traditions/Guides[2] us until the unknown/The wise man told us; I kept it in my memory/The tea legend has made history/In an imposing and prohibited city[3]/The imperial watercolor[4] slowly gains form/The dynasty characterized by its precious metals/Pays tribute to the ancestors/An immortal legacy

 


Apr 13, 2018 10:11 AM
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Olá, Bom dia. Acredito que é mais provável que você receba uma correção postando naquela aba " caderno ".
April 13, 2018
Karine
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), English, Portuguese, Spanish
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Chinese (Mandarin), English, Spanish