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Task:

You received a letter from your pen friend. Write your answer (about 50 words).

Hi,

I've just returned from my trip to Spain. It was amazing! I adore travelling. What about you? Do you liki visiting other cities ad countries? What do you usually travel with? Tell me about places you've been to.

Best wishes,
Samantha

My letter:

Hi Samantha,

I've got the letter from you. I'll try to give you answers to your questions.

Of course I like visiting other cities. There are a lot of interesting and amazing places. For example: Lviv. Lviv is very old and beatiful city, I like it. Also I really like Karpaty mountains. There is very cool and amazing. Usually I travel With my parents or friends.

I hope I gave answer to your question.

Best wishes,

Sergiy


Apr 13, 2018 5:06 PM
Comments · 1

I(  ) got the letter from you. I'll try to give you answers to your questions. 

Of course I like visiting other cities! (the exclamation point is optional but in my opinion, it sounds way better, as this is informal writing) There are a lot of interesting and amazing places. For example, (comma, not colon, after the phrase for example) Lviv. Lviv is very old and beatiful (beautiful) city, and (when you separate two phrases that could stand alone as independent sentences you must use a conjunction ie. and, but, so, or, etc.) I like it. Also, (always add a comma after also when using it to start a sentence) I really like the Karpaty mountains. It is very cool and amazing there. Usually(comma after usually when it is used to start a sentence) I travel with my parents or friends.

I hope I answered your question.

You write really well! Your errors didn't affect my understanding at all :)


April 13, 2018
Sergiy
Language Skills
English, Russian, Ukrainian
Learning Language
English