Well done. Your sentences are well structured. Although some pronunciations are inaccurate, I can understanding everything you said without reading the subtitle. You have got the feel of Cantonese, probably because you have many chances to listen to native speakers. I suggest that you listen more to radio and pay more attention to the pronunciation. Keep it up!

Well done. Very impressive for just a year and a half. I bet your gf gave you a lot of momentum to drive you keep learning Cantonese. 

You showed lots of sentence structure, vocab, tense, and connectors. Well done. You managed the tones very well, 99% correct, no confusion at all. Try chopping the word one by one, and put emphasis on every single word. 

One thing, one and a half year, should be jat1 nin4 bun3.

(I am from hk living in the uk. You're from uk living in hk) ha!

Thank you. Yes, I think I need to work on my pronunciation so I will try to listen a lot more and hope I pick it up! I think these things just need time and im sure if I keep going it will get better

You speak so well, especially on the pronunciation. I can understand what you're speaking without looking at the video. 

I can help you