Hello everybody, My name is Huyền Linh and I'm 12. I'm from Việt Nam. My hobby is eat, read comic book, watch TV, shopping,... . I like fast food like snack, sandwich, hamburger, sausage. I like spring roll the most. My favourite subject is English but my English is not very good. I want learn English, Korean, Japanese and I can teach you Vietnamese (I'm not a teacher). Please help me. Thank you and Bye!
See you later!
I am not available to be a language exchange partner, but I can make some suggestions about your very good writing.
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Hello everybody, My name is Huyền Linh and I'm 12. CORRECT
I'm from Việt Nam. CORRECT
My hobby is eat, read comic book, watch TV, shopping,... .
MY HOBBY IS EATING, READING COMIC BOOKS WATCHING TV, SHOPPING...
[MY HOBBY IS (DOING SOMETHING)]
I like fast food like snackS, sandwichS, hamburgerS, sausageS. I like spring rollS the most.
My favourite subject is English but my English is not very good. CORRECT (BUT YOUR ENGLISH IS QUITE GOOD.... I'M SURPRISED)
I want TO learn English, Korean, Japanese and I can teach you Vietnamese (I'm not a teacher).
[WE ALWAYS USE AN INFINITIVE FORM OF THE VERB THAT COMES AFTER THE VERB "WANT". FOR EXAMPLE: I WANT TO LEARN / WANT TO SLEEP / HE WANTS TO LEARN / SHE WANTS TO SLEEP... WANTS + (TO DO SOMETHING)]
Please help me. Thank you and Bye! See you later! CORRECT
I suggest you download a free grammar checker program. It
shows spelling mistakes, grammar mistakes and punctuation mistakes and it shows the corrections.
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Here are two links to the program that I recommend:
https://www.grammarly.com/office-addin/windows
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https://www.grammarly.com/native/windows
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