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Huyền Linh
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Hello everybody, My name is Huyền Linh and I'm 12. I'm from Việt Nam. My hobby is eat, read comic book, watch TV, shopping,... . I like fast food like snack, sandwich, hamburger, sausage. I like spring roll the most. My favourite subject is English but my English is not very good. I want learn English, Korean, Japanese and I can teach you Vietnamese (I'm not a teacher). Please help me. Thank you and Bye!

See you later!

Apr 20, 2018 1:55 PM
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I am not available to be a language exchange partner, but I can make some suggestions about your very good writing.

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Hello everybody, My name is Huyền Linh and I'm 12.  CORRECT

I'm from Việt Nam. CORRECT


My hobby is eat, read comic book, watch TV, shopping,... .

MY HOBBY IS EATING, READING COMIC BOOKS WATCHING TV, SHOPPING...
[MY HOBBY IS (DOING SOMETHING)]


I like fast food like snackS, sandwichS, hamburgerS, sausageS. I like spring rollS the most.


My favourite subject is English but my English is not very good. CORRECT (BUT YOUR ENGLISH IS QUITE GOOD.... I'M SURPRISED)


I want TO learn English, Korean, Japanese and I can teach you Vietnamese (I'm not a teacher).

[WE ALWAYS USE AN INFINITIVE FORM OF THE VERB THAT COMES AFTER THE VERB "WANT". FOR EXAMPLE:  I WANT TO LEARN /  WANT TO SLEEP / HE WANTS TO LEARN / SHE WANTS TO SLEEP... WANTS + (TO DO SOMETHING)]


Please help me. Thank you and Bye! See you later!   CORRECT

April 20, 2018
Alice, you can send messages but you cannot speak to anyone using the italki website. You need to use Skype, QQ, or Wechat.
April 20, 2018
It's glad to see your comment on this app.i'm new here,actually i have no idea how to use this app.can we speak with each other on this app?if you know it,please tell me.Thank you
April 20, 2018

I suggest you download a free grammar checker program. It shows spelling mistakes, grammar mistakes and punctuation mistakes and it shows the corrections.

Here are two links to the program that I recommend: 

https://www.grammarly.com/office-addin/windows

OR

https://www.grammarly.com/native/windows

April 20, 2018
Huyền Linh
Language Skills
English, Vietnamese
Learning Language
English